Saturday, November 8, 2014

read "glass" first.

notes and things.


this one was a bit tricky.

first, here's the image that inspired me:


and, if you want to watch the porn that sammy was watching on her tablet, it's this one here:


i've put both the notes and the original story notes below.  they start the same, but the main part of the story is different.  i decided that the original one was just too abusive without doing much else.  that story's ending is also what i ended up using as the base in "hanging".

i'm also not totally happy with this one.  it needed to be written so i could call the idea finished, but it's just not something i really like.  i think i could have come up with a better "trap" thing.  it's something that i remember in a lot of dolcett-style stories:  the girl thinks she can beat the system (which is usually some sort of machine that will kill her, because it's dolcett), but the thing is rigged, and she loses.  not entirely the same here, but that was kind of the thought behind it.

blah.  whatever.  i hope you liked it, anyway!

notes:

porno: http://motherless.com/797D827


wake up, sent to take shower first
taking shower when annie enters.  "shave that all off"
watches as sammy washes herself.  directs her
enema
inspects her, has her sit while she showers.

dry off together
"today we're going to go prep for a show, got it, pet?"
sammy surprised
"it's might difficult for you, but you know that i'm always going to be next to you"

annie has sammy kneel on the floor while annie dresses.
tights and long hoodie.
"do you want to travel to the gallery as a pet, or should i trust you with people clothes?" annie holds up long coat and sammy slips it on.
points to pair of shoes sitting by the door.

annie holds her hand and takes her out of the apartment for the first time
travel down elevator to annie's car.
gets in back when annie opens door.
drive to the gallery, parks behind building.
sammy tries to open the door, but the handle doesn't work.  "child locks are also pet locks."

get out, walk to the door.
wind blows up under coat, making sammy shiver.
whispers into her ear "look at all these people, pet.  none of them know you're naked under there."

annie unlocks door, leads sammy to the back room.
annie pulls off hoodie, dumps it on the ground.
turns around, "come on dummy, we need to get you ready for the show.  people will be showing up soon."

looks around dumbly.
"that means to strip, stupid!"
sammy does so, feeling damp again.

led over to large glass cube.  annie uses a tool to side metal pins inside, and then pulls the top off, revealing a large open space inside.
helps sammy step in, and then eases her into position.
legs doubled up, making her kneel, but shape holds her shins and knees up off hard surface
wedged in place.
feet angle in under her butt

annie puts glass inserts on top of thighs, and then pulls sammys hands up to front of box.
slides them into notches, with palms on box face.
new supporting sammy's neck insert, 
pulls sammy's head through gap in the box

"hold still"
top placed on sammy's back and pushed down
tool slides the pins in place, locking box closed again.

wheeled to display area, box mounted so sammy's face angled down, looks balanced on the front "knee" edge
annie picks up new box, and places it over sammy's head.  
largely empty, but has guides to keep sammy from looking too far to the sides
locked in place to the body box

annie kneels down to look sammy in the face.  "can you hear me?" comes through tiny speakers into the box
"yes" sammy says, but annie can't hear.  just smiles.

walks around to the back of the box, moves more pins, pulls section off back around sammy's crotch.
picks up replacement section that has huge clear dildo on it.
box connects to butt plug
annie puts on gloves, gives sammy a slap, lubes up both holes, and shoves the things deep inside
relocks the section to the rest of the cube

flips switch, lights at the end turn on, showing in inside of sammy clearly.
sets up cameras, one on the inside of sammy, one on sammy's face, one for full body shot.

annie leaves to get dressed in suit
sammy bored, not totally sure.  dildos are uncomfortable, but not painful
restrained, but nothing like the wax or the bag
nothing to force her to eat or drink waste
not so bad!

people start to arrive.  
sammy can see them walking around to the sides, none in front of her though. 
mill about for awhile.
sammy sees annie walk in front of her, addresses the crowd, can't hear.

screen behind her turns on.  
down left side are the views from the three cameras.  
sammy tries to look around to see where they are.
annie's gesturing to the bottom panel, of sammy's cunt

the right side opens up with video of sammy on display,
cuts to candle,
scene of her sleeping in her cage
begging frame

intercut with shots of sammy masturbating in her cage.
back and forth of sammy watching some porn, then tablet camera shooting her face as she watches
drinking piss from her bowl
begging training where she asks to be humiliated
balancing a cookie on her nose

vibrator turns on
increases power as sammy pushes onto it
pushing back next knob of butt plug pushes into her
thrusts violently, knob pops off, and into sammy's ass.

stops
two glass beads in her ass
vibrator slows as she stops fucking it
video on the screen turns her on
starts fucking the dildo again
ramps up, sammy keeps pumping on it, and another ball slides in.
orgasm hits, sammy pushes back, and another

repeats throughout evening.
cums, stops, video and humiliation excite her again, fuck dildo and get tricked by balls
feels them bumping around inside, weight pulling down.

end of the show, annie checks box, "17!  17 beads!"  sammy feels gush of lube into ass, beads are pulled back out quickly

rolled back stage.


sammy curls up into a ball when she's freed.  annie leads her to back room, where coat is hanging on rack.  sammy slips into awaiting cage, closing door behind her.

annie puts cage into trunk, drives home.


original story notes:

http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=45619818

wake up, sent to take shower first
taking shower when annie enters.  "shave that all off"
watches as sammy washes herself.  directs her
enema
inspects her, has her sit while she showers.

dry off together
"today we're going to go prep for a show, got it, pet?"
sammy surprised
"it's going to be very difficult for you, but you know that i'm always going to be next to you"

annie has sammy kneel on the floor while annie dresses.  
tights and long hoodie.
"do you want to travel to the gallery as a pet, or should i trust you with people clothes?" annie holds up long coat and sammy slips it on. 
points to pair of shoes sitting by the door.  

annie holds her hand and takes her out of the apartment for the first time
travel down elevator to annie's car.
gets in back when annie opens door.
drive to the gallery, parks behind building.
sammy tries to open the door, but the handle doesn't work.  "child locks are also pet locks."

get out, walk to the front door.
wind blows up under coat, making sammy shiver.
whispers into her ear "look at all these people, pet.  none of them know you're naked under there."

annie unlocks door, leads sammy to the back room.
annie pulls off hoodie, dumps it on the ground.
turns around, "come on dummy, we need to get you ready for the show.  people will be showing up soon."

looks around dumbly.
"that means to strip, stupid!"
sammy does so, feeling damp again.

led over to large glass cube.  annie uses a tool to side metal pins inside, and then pulls the top off, revealing a large open space inside.  
helps sammy step in, and then eases her into position.
legs doubled up, making her kneel, but shape holds her shins and knees up off hard surface
wedged in place.
feet angle in under her butt

annie puts glass inserts on top of thighs, and then pulls sammys hands up to front of box.
slides them into notches, with palms on box face.
new supporting sammy's neck insert, 
pulls sammy's head through gap in the box

"hold still"
top placed on sammy's back and pushed down
tool slides the pins in place, locking box closed again.

wheeled to display area, box mounted so sammy's face angled down, looks balanced on the front "knee" edge
annie picks up new box, and places it over sammy's head.  
largely empty, but has guides to keep sammy from looking too far to the sides
locked in place to the body box

annie kneels down to look sammy in the face.  "can you hear me?" comes through tiny speakers into the box
"yes" sammy says, but annie can't hear.  just smiles.

walks around to the back of the box, moves more pins, pulls section off back around sammy's crotch.
picks up replacement section that has huge clear dildos on it.
annie puts on gloves, gives sammy a slap, lubes up both holes, and shoves the things deep inside
relocks the section to the rest of the cube

flips switch, lights at the ends turn on, showing in inside of sammy clearly.
sets up cameras, one on the inside of sammy, one on sammy's face, one for full body shot.

annie leaves to get dressed in suit
sammy bored, not totally sure.  dildos are uncomfortable, but not painful
restrained, but nothing like the wax or the bag
nothing to force her to eat or drink waste
not so bad!

people start to arrive.  
sammy can see them walking around to the sides, none in front of her though. 
mill about for awhile.
sammy sees annie walk in front of her, addresses the crowd, can't hear.

screen behind her turns on.  
down left side are the views from the three cameras.  
sammy tries to look around to see where they are.
annie's gesturing to the bottom panel, of sammy's cunt

the right side opens up with video of sammy on display,
cuts to candle,
scene of her sleeping in her cage
begging frame

three more quick scenes maybe?
intercut with shots of sammy masturbating in her cage.
back and forth of sammy watching some porn, then tablet camera shooting her face as she watches
drinking piss from her bowl
begging training where she asks to be humiliated

sound turns on for sammy, begins to hear audience members
"shameless whore"
"waste of life"
"trash"
"stupid slut"
constant verbal abuse played for her
"look, you can see her cunt gushing"
"is she trying to fuck herself?"
"dumb cunt"
"disgusting"
"i think you can see the shit in her ass"

starts to cry, blurs her eyes so she can't see the screens, can only wiggle around while the words flood at her.

"i mean, sure, she's a fucking prostitute, but she's not ugly, i'd fuck her"
"she's suck up my cock all night, am i right?"
"what a whore.  she just wants people to accept her.  get a job, loser."
"finally, something where a bitch learns her place."

annie apologizes.
"i'm sorry, pet.  just a bit more, ok, sammy?"

more angry sounds.  i am all out of angry sounds here.  mine the shit pool?

crowd clears.  annie walks over and opens face cube.
sammy crying and sobbing
removes plugs

sammy keeps crying, harsh sobs, pukes onto floor.
annie grabs her head, holds it still, and kisses her on the forehead.
"i'm sorry, pet...samantha.  i do this thing, and i assume you're ok with it.  i pretend i don't care.  you're my most precious thing.  i'm not going to get all "oh, i love you" here.  i'm not sure that i can.  i try to do what i think is best, and i'm pretty sure i fucked this up.  i'm so sorry.  please tell me you're ok?"

sammy shuffles around, trying to break her bonds.  annie undoes her as quickly as possible.

sammy curls up into a ball when she's freed.  annie leads her to back room, where coat is hanging on rack.  sammy slips into awaiting cage, closing door behind her.

annie puts cage into trunk, drives home.

sammie jumps out, pads to cxage, pulls door closed.

annie sits down, opens door, crawls inside.

"i can never make this up to you.  i fucked up, and i'm sorry.  if you want, i'll give you everything i have.  i think the rent here is like $2500 a month?"

sammy keeps curled up.

annie kisses again, goes to sleep next to her.

hours later, sammy wakes up, realizes.

goes to annie's bed, pulls down covers.

wakes up annie.  brings her to bed.  pulls covers over themselves.

annie sleeps curled around sammy.

hugs back.

2 comments:

  1. I'm glad you went with the version you did. I liked it better than the original outline you did. To be honest, not my favorite in the series, but still pretty good. The glass cube idea was intriguing.

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    1. it just didn't work out the way i wanted, i guess. and yeah, when i reread the original outline, i just knew that it wouldn't be something i'd like. that's part of the reason why the other parts came out first. they had stories that worked from the start for me, so i just had to write them out.

      i hope you like the next part! it's mostly written, i just need to sort out where i want to put the ending.

      love,
      sammy

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