Tuesday, November 11, 2014

read "food" first.

you know the drill by now




pants is a dumb word at the end.  "her legs were in individual legs" sounded dumb, and i use "sleeve" later.  i just gave up on rewriting it, as everyone can figure out what's going on.

anyway, this has very little to do with food.  a lot of these stories have very little to do with the word that's their title.  in any case, the idea here started as Annie feeding Sammy her shit.  however, that led to the realization that that's kind of a step up in their relationship.  Sammy's only had her own waste this whole time, and her sexual interactions with Annie have been limited to things like showering together.

so if things are changing, how is it going to work?  i basically couldn't figure out how this would ever work without being weird and silly.  it's kind of like, you can't just switch from locking Sammy in a cage and torturing her for show to some sort of lovey-dovey kind of thing.  there has to be a middle point where they slowly work out boundaries.

hopefully this worked better than "glass" for other people.  i like this one, and i need to sort out bits of the next one, but i think i like that one too.

sorry that i went with scat as the thing to include in my "romantic" part.  my brain is weird like that.  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯


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notes (this one had a lot of mental rewrites.  the old ending was too abrupt for me)

annie gets out begging rack

sammy climbs in.

"anniversary of when we met.  and i think you're right, you really do love me."

fills glass with piss and shits on plate.  places next to slice of cake on table.

"you can have whatever you want.  i know you've had your own piss and shit, but never anyone else's."

"please feed me" sammy blurts out.

"please feed me your shit"

does so.  uses her foot to rub sammy's crotch.  uses her toes to pinch her clit.  "you'd really do anything i ask, wouldn't you?"

puts cake on floor, and steps on it, and raises smushed cake toes up for sammy to lick it off.

"i love you"

2 comments:

  1. Is this the end of the series? If so, it's a nice one. I like where it went. I'm not crazy about the way the scat thing went so easily, but I can see that was all part of your plan for this thing. Can't wait to read what you come up with next.

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    1. there's definitely one more part in my head at the moment. i have ghosts of other ideas that haven't sorted out yet, so i don't think this is over yet. in hindsight, this probably would have been a good place to end, but since i already had the next part in my head, i didn't think about doing so.

      and yeah. scat's just one of those things for me. i know it's not everyone's thing. sorry!

      love,
      sammy

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