Wednesday, October 29, 2014

again, read "Hanging" before reading this.

this is the notes and comments post.




so yeah.  no one actually died, but i thought it was a "spooky" halloween thing to say.  spooky.

there are some things that i came up with, but couldn't figure out how to put them in, so these are just "behind the scenes" things.  first, the check is for $70,000.  that's probably not realistic for Annie to be making that, but whatever.  my story.  second, Annie goes to the bathroom because she was super nervous that Sammy would leave.  so, even though it all works out, she goes there and sits next to the toilet until she stops feeling like she's going to puke.

the idea behind this one was something i came up with while half-snoozing/half-masturbating sunday morning.  it was just a idea of doing a hanging, and it really got to me.  the problem was, the reference (from "Exercise") wasn't actually written yet.  that's one reason why i did that one on sunday, so i could have it done and get on to writing this one.  there's one more story that should be between "Exercise" and "Hanging", but it's not story-important, so it can wait.  i do think i'm going to try to get them all written before submitting to literotica.  and before sending them to bdsmlibrary, although i'm pretty sure it'll be like june before they update anything.

the only other thing is that i think a noose would fall apart correctly if you cut that loop that's on the top of the knot, and make the rope springy so it pops open.  probably not a good idea to try to test this, though.  but that "figure something out" below is a note to me.  i had the first part idea, and then made that note and went away, because i didn't know how to make it work either.



writing notes:

sitting on couch watching tv.  sammy has head in annie's lap.  looks up at her.

"i want you to hang me."

"What? that'd break your neck!"

"after that thing where i had to walk in circles to breathe, it's really turned me on, and i wanted you to hang me."

"you stupid cunt, i had my hand on the button holding the air valve closed.  the moment i thought you were in trouble, i would have released it, and you'd have all the air you needed.  i can't do that with a noose!"

"please?  is there some way?"

reaches down and grabs sammy by the neck and squeezes.  sammy reaches down and starts masturbating as she looks up at annie.  annie releases.  "fine.  i'll try to figure something out you stupid slut."  smiles.

<figure something out>

chastity belt style vibrator in front and back
vibrator linked to oxygen meter
hands tied together, locked in in leather bag
feet lashed together
blindfold with nose hooks.  hollow, connected to air supply
stands on box
noose around neck metal clipped onto top of knot.

asks when it'll happen
annie waits
"useless slut sammy has asked to be hanged.  it has been my decision that this signals how much she hates this life, and have decided to grant her wish.  she shall be hanged by the neck until dead."

"what?  dead?  that wasn't..."

trap sprung, tightens, and sammy thrashes around trying to escape.
vibrator turns on, and increases in power as sammy struggles
continues to ramp up until she has an orgasm
lungs spasm as she passes out.  pees down her leg into the box.

annie releases her button, metal clip slices through the knot
spring loaded rope flexes straight, releasing sammy's neck.
nose hooks push oxygen into her nose
shock from anal plug.

sammy gasps awake to find her head in annie's lap.
"is that what you wanted?"

"no...but...yes.  thank you."

annie stands up, picking up and flipping sammy's head into the box.

"fine.  now clean up your mess.  if you're just going to pee in everything I make for you, then you just won't get new things."

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