Friday, May 3, 2019

a new chapter

An Unhappy Day.

i'm about to go on vacation this weekend, so either i put up what i have done, or it sits for another two weeks.

i don't know why chapter 2s are always so hard for me to get through.  we'll see if the third chapter can get done in a reasonable amount of time.

4 comments:

  1. I'd say that things are looking up, though. Right?

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    1. for me, independent of my editing skill?

      yes.

      i am taking a bunch of drugs now, and my brain doesn't fuck up so much, and i haven't cut, and i drink way less, and i'm just so much less BAD than things used to be.

      i probably should do more 1-on-1 therapy, and be more open on my paraphilias, but that's not super necessary for modern life, so we'll coast from here.

      thanks for your story blog. i have so many new stories to read, it's a good thing!

      :)

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  2. I'm suspecting somehow that Milon is not going to be a kind and loving mistress. Of course one abuser is better than several abusers, so it's an improvement, no doubt. People has democratically voted something stupid, so be it. As if that were uncommon.

    Careful with nurse scrubs comments ;): "She pulled her pants down slightly, [add nurse scrubs comment] revealing a faded scar in the shape of a paw print with a bar code underneath it." Where is the brand, by the way? Thigh, crotch, waist?

    Shall I deduce that in two weeks we'll reach the F-f parts you seem to like better?

    -Onkana

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    1. fuck
      me.
      :(

      i need to edit better.

      the brand is crotch and left ass cheek. since i'm working from Mr. NimbleTail, i've glossed a lot: http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/NimbleTail/666191/Compulsory-Pettification-5-Tagged

      and i had planned a lot of good ff stuff. but then my brain got involved, and smoothed out some plot points, and then supplied a subplot that negates a lot of the obvious sex stuff, but is still really good, so i'm going with it, but it's not as gratifying, but i think it's better.

      soooooo, i guess this is me "growing as a writer" or "becoming an adult" or "fuck you, sammy, gimme some licky-sex!"

      sorry.
      :-/

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